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qirrat awan

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The plant.

    It was a nice one 1 and informative too but somehow it is not that bright i think! it needs to be a little bright in a sense it should ...

    Jun 28, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Vampire

    hey its great! i uh.... i am not a teacher and cant really tell about your mistakes because i didn't find any i thought like i was watching a video ...

    Jun 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This Tear's For You.

    You know you did a fantastic job here! the reply above about rhyming and Not fitting words! well i don't agree with that because rhyming or no rhyming your composition ...

    Jun 25, 2008


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind